3rd Jan 2019, 9:51 AM in Abúi's Grand Tour

Nap queen

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Nap queen
Panel 1:
Adrienne and Quinn sit on a bed.
Adrienne: And so when I saw that cop, I just knew what was up. Something was just off about him, y'know?
Abúi (off-panel): Mm, mmm.


Panel 2:
Quinn starts to doze off as Adrienne keeps talking.
Adrienne: And him zooming in on the butler like that, without paying attention to the crime scene? The other cop was OK, but clueless.
Abúi (off-panel): Oh, yes!

Panel 3:
Adrienne slaps Quinn awake.
SFX: Slap!
Adrienne: I tried to warn him, but the butler was faster than me. Good for him. You don't get two chances with those insectoid fuckers, y'know what I'm saying?
Abúi (off-panel): Slow, down! No, keep going!

Panel 4:
Adrienne is fiinally getting fed up with the noise from off-panel.
Adrienne: But it was a hot mess and I don't think us Venusians will be- Just a second.
Abúi (off-panel): Yes! YES!

Panel 5:
Wide panel showing Abúi and Monroe fucking, just as everyone reading the first four panels would have expected. Yep, that's the twist, right there.
Abúi: Ah! Ah! Ah1 Aaaahhgnn!
Adrienne: Can you guys keep it down? I'm trying to have a conversation here!
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Author Notes:

Reinder Dijkhuis 3rd Jan 2019, 9:51 AM edit delete
Reinder Dijkhuis
When I first wrote this scene, I tried, for maybe five minutes, to resist pacing it like THAT scene.

Comments:

SB01 3rd Jan 2019, 10:13 AM edit delete reply
Hey I was thinking , is it possible to upload this comic on Tapastic app ( u heard of ?)
Reinder Dijkhuis 3rd Jan 2019, 7:43 PM edit delete reply
Reinder Dijkhuis
I've learned the hard way not to make any hard promises with regards to my webcomics, but I feel safe making this one: under no circumstances will I upload any of my comics to Tapastics, and I will not consent to other people uploading them to Tapastic - indeed I will come down like a tonne of bricks on anyone who tries.

If you ever see any of my comics on Tapastic, know that they have been stolen and put there without my consent.

Yeah, I have heard of them and what I've heard is very very not good. They are not to be trusted or supported.
THE_BEHOLDER 3rd Jan 2019, 5:14 PM edit delete reply
THE_BEHOLDER
After all these travels, Abúi deserves some hey hey.