3rd Jan 2019, 9:51 AM in Abúi's Grand Tour

Nap queen

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Nap queen
Panel 1:
Adrienne and Quinn sit on a bed.
Adrienne: And so when I saw that cop, I just knew what was up. Something was just off about him, y'know?
Abúi (off-panel): Mm, mmm.


Panel 2:
Quinn starts to doze off as Adrienne keeps talking.
Adrienne: And him zooming in on the butler like that, without paying attention to the crime scene? The other cop was OK, but clueless.
Abúi (off-panel): Oh, yes!

Panel 3:
Adrienne slaps Quinn awake.
SFX: Slap!
Adrienne: I tried to warn him, but the butler was faster than me. Good for him. You don't get two chances with those insectoid fuckers, y'know what I'm saying?
Abúi (off-panel): Slow, down! No, keep going!

Panel 4:
Adrienne is fiinally getting fed up with the noise from off-panel.
Adrienne: But it was a hot mess and I don't think us Venusians will be- Just a second.
Abúi (off-panel): Yes! YES!

Panel 5:
Wide panel showing Abúi and Monroe fucking, just as everyone reading the first four panels would have expected. Yep, that's the twist, right there.
Abúi: Ah! Ah! Ah1 Aaaahhgnn!
Adrienne: Can you guys keep it down? I'm trying to have a conversation here!
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Author Notes:

Reinder Dijkhuis 3rd Jan 2019, 9:51 AM edit delete
Reinder Dijkhuis
When I first wrote this scene, I tried, for maybe five minutes, to resist pacing it like THAT scene.

Comments:

SB01 3rd Jan 2019, 10:13 AM edit delete reply
Hey I was thinking , is it possible to upload this comic on Tapastic app ( u heard of ?)
Reinder Dijkhuis 3rd Jan 2019, 7:43 PM edit delete reply
Reinder Dijkhuis
I've learned the hard way not to make any hard promises with regards to my webcomics, but I feel safe making this one: under no circumstances will I upload any of my comics to Tapastics, and I will not consent to other people uploading them to Tapastic - indeed I will come down like a tonne of bricks on anyone who tries.

If you ever see any of my comics on Tapastic, know that they have been stolen and put there without my consent.

Yeah, I have heard of them and what I've heard is very very not good. They are not to be trusted or supported.
THE_BEHOLDER 3rd Jan 2019, 5:14 PM edit delete reply
THE_BEHOLDER
After all these travels, Abúi deserves some hey hey.
Hogan 2nd Jan 2020, 6:53 PM edit delete reply
Hogan
That must have been your New Year's resolution finally getting Abui some? XD
... and chivalry, for both sexes, is not dead! Just tone the noises down a bit :P